tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post5622261928224634794..comments2023-10-26T11:14:47.885-04:00Comments on The Waiting is the Hardest Part: Tessa's Birthday Bash BlogfestHeather M. Gardnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-36662666157133474632011-01-26T09:29:01.657-05:002011-01-26T09:29:01.657-05:00Katie/Anon - I thought you were on Team Edward?
We...Katie/Anon - I thought you were on Team Edward?<br />We shall see. Caine is growing on me.Heather M. Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-46517001608006396122011-01-26T09:02:37.712-05:002011-01-26T09:02:37.712-05:00You must develop this! You know enough about para...You must develop this! You know enough about paranormal stuff you can create the world you want - I bet you even already have created it in that head of yours. I want to learn more - I love big, strong, and yes, even hairy, men!! :-D<br />KatieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-71965319734740383722011-01-24T13:30:50.491-05:002011-01-24T13:30:50.491-05:00Talei - That is very kind of you to say! Thanks fo...Talei - That is very kind of you to say! Thanks for coming in to read it.Heather M. Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-55443353416371321582011-01-24T11:51:56.210-05:002011-01-24T11:51:56.210-05:00Great dialogue! Well done, I really enjoyed readi...Great dialogue! Well done, I really enjoyed reading your piece here. ;)Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-73209524550991127122011-01-23T21:50:35.328-05:002011-01-23T21:50:35.328-05:00Tessa - I appreciate that you gave us the opportun...Tessa - I appreciate that you gave us the opportunity and the challenge! Thank you for your compliments. Caine is starting to grow on me and I might have to write some more about him.<br /><br />Jessica - I'm so glad you found it interesting. I really don't know where I'm going with it...yet! So many kind compliments that I may have to dwell on it a little longer. Thanks for stopping in.Heather M. Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-70171564770523064032011-01-23T18:42:48.243-05:002011-01-23T18:42:48.243-05:00OH that dreaded game of alcohol catch-up haha This...OH that dreaded game of alcohol catch-up haha This was REALLY interesting. I'm curious how he's going to outrun those in the "pack" who'd like to be leader. And I'm wondering if this means werewolves?! I'd love to read more something :) Great job (AND great dialogue--almost forgot to mention) and thank you for sharing!Jessica Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15405267450788581689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-7547664942823589262011-01-23T12:22:17.010-05:002011-01-23T12:22:17.010-05:00LOVE IT!!!
First, thank you so much for joining ...LOVE IT!!! <br /><br />First, thank you so much for joining in my Birthday Bash! Sorry I'm so late commenting, I partied a bit much on friday and then I had a Ball (the old-fashioned kind) last night. <br /><br />Second, I LOVE werewolves, so this is a PERFECT story for me. And even if he weren't a were, this is a GREAT excerpt, smoothly flowing narrative and a fascinating MC. If this is a WIP of yours, I wanna read it!!!! And if it isn't, I hope it will be, coz it sounds great! <br /><br />T.xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-79610646027318727362011-01-22T14:31:36.250-05:002011-01-22T14:31:36.250-05:00Thank you all for such great comments! It was so n...Thank you all for such great comments! It was so nice to read them all today.<br /><br />Marc - I was right there with you. Too funny. Thanks for coming in and working on the 'pilot'!<br /><br />Liz - Thank you. I hesitated to even post this with one days work but I'm so glad I shared it.<br /><br />Francine - Thanks so much! Very kind words.<br /><br />Michelle - It's the first time I have ever written 'werewolf' in anything. It just popped out and then I let it sit there a while and it seemed to work. Stepping over to the paranormal side of writing is daunting. I'll have to think on it some. Thanks for stopping in.<br /><br />Murees - Thank you for your positive feedback. It always helps.<br /><br />Delia - Thank you. With such a short word count required it helps pinpoint what needs to be said and what doesn't. Thanks for coming.<br /><br />Christopher - So sorry you had an issue. It seems to be working currently. Glad you were able to read it. Thanks for commenting.Heather M. Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-76728351461640923592011-01-22T12:21:40.909-05:002011-01-22T12:21:40.909-05:00I wanted to read your piece, but there's somet...I wanted to read your piece, but there's something screwy with the colors. It's all blacked out and your text doesn't show up.<br />Take a look at your settings.<br /><br />I found a way to read it by hilighting the text with my cursor. Anyhoo, I like the tension! And the mystery. News like that always sets the reader up for a wild ride. Nice post.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07995267172282765794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-33449083418478913892011-01-22T10:56:33.971-05:002011-01-22T10:56:33.971-05:00Nice! A good start, getting the stakes right out t...Nice! A good start, getting the stakes right out there in front. Well done.Deliahttp://procrastinationrehabilitation.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-37489676079436801432011-01-22T10:18:04.409-05:002011-01-22T10:18:04.409-05:00Loved it! You really have a talent Heather. Don...Loved it! You really have a talent Heather. Don't let anyone ever tell you different. I can't wait for you to be published so that I can read some more.Murees Dupèhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11781339206465690961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-55151021065364776832011-01-22T09:58:20.868-05:002011-01-22T09:58:20.868-05:00btw, i'm following, but my picture won't s...btw, i'm following, but my picture won't show up. nice blogger glitch.Michelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-1182903172317363452011-01-22T09:53:03.345-05:002011-01-22T09:53:03.345-05:00i'm not usually a werewolf story person, but t...i'm not usually a werewolf story person, but this one has me wanting more. great tenion.<br /><br />btw, i think scrapbooking would be easier too, but fool that i am, i keep writing. i put up a post about this you might be interested in--<br /><br />http://michellegregory.blogspot.com/2009/09/insert-appropriate-title-here.htmlMichelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-8795968151604535332011-01-22T09:14:42.809-05:002011-01-22T09:14:42.809-05:00Hi,
Brilliant. Well done. Neat casual lead throug...Hi,<br /><br />Brilliant. Well done. Neat casual lead through past experieces and a serious cliffhanger. Fab piece of writing! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-64873512322711212192011-01-22T08:56:28.157-05:002011-01-22T08:56:28.157-05:00Wow! This is a good start!! I can feel the grittin...Wow! This is a good start!! I can feel the grittiness of it. Am intrigued to learn more about these characters! Pretty good for one afternoon, Heather. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-26897196966552802602011-01-22T07:52:26.335-05:002011-01-22T07:52:26.335-05:00I'm seeing a "Characters Welcome" se...I'm seeing a "Characters Welcome" series in your future :).<br />I can picture a cop kicking in a door after hearing a scream in a low rent apartment where he was trying to interview neighbors after a grisly murder. The door flies open and the murder is in the entryway tucked behind a struggling hostage. As Caine is yelling "Drop it!" He hears a low growl from behind cut to a pov shot from the hostage of his Caine, blue eyes turning yellow as an out of focus pointy eared shadow rises behind him. Cut to Title Sequence. Quick cuts of moon time lapse through phases as Show title dissolves up... "Caine Ascending ".Marcfdvdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12337608194315811382noreply@blogger.com