tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post602935701699261692..comments2023-10-26T11:14:47.885-04:00Comments on The Waiting is the Hardest Part: Auntie Tara's Short Story PromptHeather M. Gardnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-10082075050652651232012-02-05T08:50:15.118-05:002012-02-05T08:50:15.118-05:00Christine - Wow! Thank you. I'm glad to hear t...Christine - Wow! Thank you. I'm glad to hear that. Those word limits force you to pack information densely. Welcome!Heather M. Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-69805208429674179432012-02-03T20:22:52.853-05:002012-02-03T20:22:52.853-05:00Wow. That was a hot ending! Where can I find a har...Wow. That was a hot ending! Where can I find a harp like that? I love your writing style. It's fun, witty, and nicely detailed. Great job. :) New follower here.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-14277443321345589412012-01-30T16:19:09.123-05:002012-01-30T16:19:09.123-05:00Alex - Ha! You're thinking what I'm thinki...Alex - Ha! You're thinking what I'm thinking!<br /><br />Suzanne - Thank you!<br /><br />Jessica - Welcome! Thank you. It wasn't so bad once I got in the dialogue! ;)<br /><br />Tara - Thank you! You said 'keep it clean' so I didn't let them go any further!<br /><br />Keru - It sounds like you liked it and I appreciate your thoughts! Thank you!<br />HMGHeather M. Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07232419331422866247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-80757165970163629252012-01-29T21:26:10.267-05:002012-01-29T21:26:10.267-05:00Dressed all in black he looked deliciously evil.
...<i>Dressed all in black he looked deliciously evil. </i><br /><br />I really liked that line as it opened up my senses - sight and taste to the scene. And then, at the mention of boots, I could totally "hear" them against, say, the hardwood floors as he moved in. (^__^)<br /><br />I also love the sarcasm: <i>I only stopped in this jewelry store on a whim figuring it would be too small to carry what I was looking for. Now, I was pretty convinced that was the case.</i><br /><br />Oh, how often have I stopped in a store figuring I was safe from the pressure of finding (and then buying) what I'm really looking for because they don't have it? Haha!Keru (a.k.a. Manny)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02829556730806491072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-92129217776053234162012-01-29T20:48:28.822-05:002012-01-29T20:48:28.822-05:00awesome job! you could use that for the "is i...awesome job! you could use that for the "is it getting hot in here" blog hop =) spicy! ayayayeee!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-16418806596146793532012-01-29T12:09:33.712-05:002012-01-29T12:09:33.712-05:00Hey! it's been a while, thanks for stopping by...Hey! it's been a while, thanks for stopping by. I like this, I might give it a try, but 750 words is a challenge, nicely done.Jessica A. Brioneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05371485033628888782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-25659694929157178622012-01-29T09:14:11.238-05:002012-01-29T09:14:11.238-05:00Be still my heart or other places. Nicely done. An...Be still my heart or other places. Nicely done. And I laughed.Suzanne W. Skeelshttp://swskeels.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7760014651173370020.post-68526828059287434122012-01-29T08:55:00.496-05:002012-01-29T08:55:00.496-05:00She may not even make it to the party, so wouldn&#...She may not even make it to the party, so wouldn't worry about the card!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com