So, instead, I'm going to post my crappy query letter and let you guys take pot shots at it!
Since I trust you, my strange unfathomable followers, with everything else why not let you tell me all the things that are wrong with my letter!
Do you remember the night of your high school graduation?
Riley Kincaid can remember every moment in startling detail.
Colin Campbell’s memory of that night has more holes than the PGA tour.
While Colin is home, taking a break from his band’s chaotic schedule to attend his twin sister’s wedding, his own world is rocked when he confronts Riley to learn why she has scorned him for almost ten years.
Riley has vowed to be the perfect bridesmaid to her best friend, Kerry, even when she is forced to spend three days with the man that literally loved her and left her.
After Colin and Riley begin to practice full disclosure about their past they agree to take a chance on their future. But, will their new tenuous relationship survive the launch of his band’s rock tour and domineering manager and her formerly absent but currently intrusive parents?
Setting the Record Straight is my contemporary romance of approximately 55,000 words in length.
Have at it! What do you like? What do you hate? What do you get? What don't you get? What did I forget? Why doesn't anyone want it? Does it suck? Have you already read this book? Should I put it away? Should I hang up my QWERTY keyboard?
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