Auntie Tara ... aka ... Tara from Tara Tyler Talks has come up with a monthly writing challenge for her blog followers.
I don't know if I can or will participate every month but I gave January a try.
January's prompt: write a short story of 750
words or less including these four words: EVIL, CROWD, HARP, WATERFALL.
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“What about a xylophone?” the
salesman asked.
“No. That won’t work at all. She
played a harp. It needs to be a harp.”
Perhaps he needed me to say
the word ‘harp’ in a different language because he didn’t understand me in
English. I only stopped in this jewelry store on a whim figuring it would be
too small to carry what I was looking for. Now, I was pretty convinced that was
the case.
“I see a French horn and a
piano but no harp.”
“Thanks for checking for me.
I guess I’ll have to head up to the mall,” I said turning towards the front
door.
“Wait! Is this a harp?”
I walked to the counter he
was hunched behind and tried to make out the pins beneath the grimy glass.
“I do believe that’s a harp.
Can you bring it out to show me?”
“Sure. It’s old so be
careful.”
“Of course. Sterling Silver.
Great condition. Clasp still functions. But, there’s no price tag on it.”
“I can check the book but I
think its $100.”
“It’s not encrusted with
gems. Just silver. I’ll give you $30."
“It’s antique. $80.”
“It’s been in your store cabinet
long enough to develop a layer of dust an inch thick. $40.”
“You’re the one who wants it.
$60.”
“I’ll give you that. $50 is
my final offer.”
“You’ve got a deal.”
I paid the salesmen and he placed
the pin in a small velvet bag before he handed it to me with my receipt. I left
the store feeling triumphant. I had the perfect gift for my father’s new wife.
A little silver
polish and elbow grease to spruce it up and I could give it to her at her fiftieth
birthday party. William, my father, had an elaborate celebration planned for
his new love. He had chosen a very special restaurant and booked the Rainforest
Room.
He was exceedingly excited
when he told me, “Dana, it has an indoor waterfall and live exotic animals
behind glass in the same room as the party! She’s going to love it!”
Arriving back at my apartment
I gathered the items I would need. Newspaper for the kitchen table, the silver
polish, some clean cloths and cotton swabs. After reading the polish
instructions I began to carefully clean the pin.
It seemed to warm in my hands
as I rubbed the polish around with the cloth. The metal was very beautiful once
the coating of dust had been removed. Flipping it over I noticed there were small
words printed on the back. I couldn’t make them out and had to find my
magnifying glass.
Bain ceol as an saol.
“How the hell do you say
that?” I wondered.
I continued working on the
pin using the cotton swabs to clean the individual silver strings.
All the while my mind was trying to pronounce the strange words.
Pleased with my work I used a
new cloth to remove all the excess polish. As I gave it a final swipe the
foreign words simply formed on my tongue and I spoke them aloud.
“Bain ceol as an saol."
The kitchen lights flickered
above me. The harp pin began to glow softly in my hands. A warm breeze lifted
the hair off the back of my neck and the air sizzled with electricity.
I had just a moment to wonder
if I was being electrocuted when a thunderous clap sounded from the other room.
I dropped the pin and hurried down the hallway. Standing in my bedroom doorway
was the most beautiful man ever created.
Tall, broad, built by the
gods. Face chiseled from stone. Hair as dark as a winter’s night. Eyes as green
as the thickest forest.
Dressed all in black he
looked deliciously evil. He wore heavy boots over tight pants. His shirt lay open
to reveal a large expanse of golden skin and a single tattoo on his chest of a
harp.
“And the crowd goes wild,” I
mumbled under my breath.
“My name is Kieran. You’ve
called to me, Dana.”
“I did?”
“Yes.”
He stepped from the doorway
and now stood inches from me. Looking up at him I was giddy. He smelled
of the ocean and heat radiated from him giving me goose bumps.
“What did I say?”
“Bain ceol as an saol. It
means, reap music from life.”
“That’s beautiful.”
With one more step he had me
backed up against the wall. All his hard plains fitting against my soft curves.
“You're beautiful. I’m here for you. Whatever
you need or want.”
His mouth captured mine in a
soul searing kiss that left me boneless and breathless. As his lips trailed down
my neck, setting my whole body on fire, I prayed I would remember to pick up a nice
gift card for my step-mother.
She may not even make it to the party, so wouldn't worry about the card!
ReplyDeleteBe still my heart or other places. Nicely done. And I laughed.
ReplyDeleteHey! it's been a while, thanks for stopping by. I like this, I might give it a try, but 750 words is a challenge, nicely done.
ReplyDeleteawesome job! you could use that for the "is it getting hot in here" blog hop =) spicy! ayayayeee!
ReplyDeleteDressed all in black he looked deliciously evil.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that line as it opened up my senses - sight and taste to the scene. And then, at the mention of boots, I could totally "hear" them against, say, the hardwood floors as he moved in. (^__^)
I also love the sarcasm: I only stopped in this jewelry store on a whim figuring it would be too small to carry what I was looking for. Now, I was pretty convinced that was the case.
Oh, how often have I stopped in a store figuring I was safe from the pressure of finding (and then buying) what I'm really looking for because they don't have it? Haha!
Alex - Ha! You're thinking what I'm thinking!
ReplyDeleteSuzanne - Thank you!
Jessica - Welcome! Thank you. It wasn't so bad once I got in the dialogue! ;)
Tara - Thank you! You said 'keep it clean' so I didn't let them go any further!
Keru - It sounds like you liked it and I appreciate your thoughts! Thank you!
HMG
Wow. That was a hot ending! Where can I find a harp like that? I love your writing style. It's fun, witty, and nicely detailed. Great job. :) New follower here.
ReplyDeleteChristine - Wow! Thank you. I'm glad to hear that. Those word limits force you to pack information densely. Welcome!
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