Wednesday, June 11, 2014

My query gets critiqued.


If you're interested to read my query for book 2 in the Maguire's Corner series, One Good Catch, then head on over to the Unicorn Bell blog where CD Coffelt AKA Huntress takes a stab at making it sing!

It could really use some voice lessons.

Feel free to add to the discussion.

I can take it.



  1. First, I was like, "what's a query?". Before I asked I figured I would just go to the blog you linked and see if my pretty little head could figure it out. Done :)
    Now, I am soooo not a writer. The original query sounded great to me. Until I read the revised one and thought that sounded good too!
    So, I will not critique...instead I will wish you luck. Good Luck!

  2. Ooo. Query critique. Painful but necessary.

    Good luck! :)


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